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I lie in the damp, rustling grass,
Spellbound beneath iridescent stars,
A tranquil zephyr whisks against my face,
This silent night is so serene,
Lost in the sands of the infinite,
The still world, wrapped in a ghostly veil.
Passionate bliss under crystal moonlight.

You lie there by my side,
Holding my hand gently in yours,
Vibrant hair flowing in the breeze,
My gaze is adrift within those oceanic eyes,
Trapped for eternity,
Your melodious voice, a nightingale among pigeons.
Your aura imprisons me, slowly drawing me closer.

We, frozen in time,
Held by the other’s presence,
Our minds fixed sharing a single thought,
Tightly bound to one another,
Never dreaming to let go,
We draw closer.
Lips intertwine for our first kiss.
:iconlil-drummer-boy:

Author's Comments

In case you haven't figured it out by now, I'm an extreme romantic and this poem really reflects that. I'm not like most stereotypical guys that constantly thinks about sex, honestly sex is the last thing that's ever on my mind when it comes to girls. I am someone who is perfectly happy simply by spending time with a girl. This poem is about my perfect setting, my perfect moment with a girl and I hope I will one day mimic this in my life

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:iconxobellalovelaceox:
Excellent imagery. It's romantic in the best sense of the word. :)

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Never allow yourself to be made a victim. Accept no ones definition of your life. Define yourself.
:jsenn::camera: :bookdiva: :pumpkin: :tombstone: :blackrose: :sun: :earth: :star: :snowflake: :skullbones: :heart: :shamrock: :music: :damphyr: :community:
:iconlil-drummer-boy:
Why thank you, I greatly appreciate the praise :heart:
:iconxobellalovelaceox:
No problem.

--
Never allow yourself to be made a victim. Accept no ones definition of your life. Define yourself.
:jsenn::camera: :bookdiva: :pumpkin: :tombstone: :blackrose: :sun: :earth: :star: :snowflake: :skullbones: :heart: :shamrock: :music: :damphyr: :community:
:iconlightningbluefang:
Very heartwarming <3 the structure of this poem flows quite smoothly, and the mood is so pure, I can practically visualise it. I'm certain that one day you'll find a girl to share those moments with [if you haven't already]~

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¿ s ı ɥ ʇ ǝ ʞ ı ן ǝ d ʎ ʇ o ʇ ʍ o ɥ ʍ o u ʞ ɐ u u ɐ ʍ
:iconlil-drummer-boy:
Well I have shared some fond memories...not as romantic as this poem but some great memories with a girl that I miss, a lot and I fell inlove with her but sadly things...well they never exactly started, I sort of vaguely explained that "topic" to someone who commented on my "Mind Versus Heart" poem if you wish to read about it and if you want more detail I have no problems sharing
:iconlil-drummer-boy:
Haha yea, that girl and I had gone thru a lot together and even now we still seem to have a strong bond that's held even thru the hottest of our battles...but sadly its not the same and I don't know if she still feels the way she did or even cares about any of that anymore...
:iconlightningbluefang:
Hm...kind of reminds me about the feelings right before losing a childhood best friend. Chances are something, whether it be physical or emotional, got involved and wore away at the strong bonds, altering it. You could either have a heart-to-heart discussion regarding what's happened and possible solutions, or the alternative would just be to try and forget.

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¿ s ı ɥ ʇ ǝ ʞ ı ן ǝ d ʎ ʇ o ʇ ʍ o ɥ ʍ o u ʞ ɐ u u ɐ ʍ
:iconlil-drummer-boy:
It'll probably end up being the ladder

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